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Lingering to my thoughts
Talking to a wandering soul
Tough it seems, to untie the knots
But is essential to achieve the goal
The restless mortal is unsure
The future that points to the
destiny
Often this leaves the one too impure
That even a friend can act as an
enemy
Turning the pages of the past memoirs
Oh! It caused him to behest his
present
To weave out a long rope like that
from a coir
Uncanny to him was it all meant
The urge that burnt a candle inside
Doesn't seem to seize anymore
The wanderlust is somewhere left
deprived
Beautiful poem !
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Uma :)
DeleteGreat shot and nice lines to go with it.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Cynthia :)
DeleteIn the midst of an ocean, it is still looking for a shore. lovely lines
ReplyDeleteThank you Kalpana :)
DeleteNice Poem :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Arun :) Means a lot :)
DeleteWhat a captivating click. The title is catchy and the poem is even better.
ReplyDelete"The urge that burnt a candle inside
Doesn't seem to seize anymore"
Keep it up. :)
Thanks Ankita for stopping by and for the kind and motivating words :)
Deletei guess that happens to everyone at some point in our lives....it's just a matter of time before we bounce back into life and reach our shore! loved these lines!
ReplyDeleteYes it do happens :) Thanks :)
DeleteThanks Rajneesh :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful, has so much to dig into...
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot Saru!
DeleteLovely....U used the words beautifully!
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DeleteLoved the poem. Well written, nice words, metaphors and images. Life is such a journey to the unseen, unanticipated destination. Keep the good work up.
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Thanks a lot Sayantini :)
Deletebrilliant poem.. and equally beautiful picture.. loved it :)
ReplyDeleteThank you Meera :)
DeleteI liked this poem ..deep and interesting
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Deleteyes Ashwini :) thanks for reading and I am glad you liked it :)
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