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A walk on the moon!

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Distant to you, it may seem
But it’s closer than you think
See beyond your wildest dream
No, please avoid that blink

The courage you possess
And remain unaware about
As a knight in the game of chess
Charge ahead, don’t be in a doubt

Lying broken with dismay
The petty defeats make you stumble
These are a small price you pay
Stand up when you fall, don't bumble

Stay awake, stay alive
Cover up the burning wicks
Don't let the flame die
Build a wall with the iron bricks

I will be waiting for you
Hope you reach there soon
You will be out of the blue
Believe me, it will be like a walk on the moon!


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  1. kalpana solsiOctober 11, 2013 at 2:09 PM

    nice one , Saurabh.

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  2. Alok singhalOctober 12, 2013 at 4:02 AM

    This is so wonderful! A great piece!

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    1. Saurabh ChawlaOctober 12, 2013 at 9:44 PM

      Thanks a lot Alok :)

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    2. Saru SinghalOctober 14, 2013 at 10:35 PM

      @Alok - Kabhi mere blog pe bhi comment kar diya karo :P

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    3. Saurabh ChawlaOctober 22, 2013 at 9:15 PM

      Haha :P yes Alok sir you should comment on her blog too! very bad! High five Saru :)

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  3. Privy TriflesOctober 13, 2013 at 2:49 PM

    Wow.... nice poem !!

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  4. Alka GurhaOctober 13, 2013 at 5:59 PM

    Love the optimism in the words.

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  5. AnonymousOctober 13, 2013 at 7:37 PM

    Brilliant poem on positive energy and human triumph:)

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  6. RatOctober 13, 2013 at 9:10 PM

    wonderful piece carries so much of hope. good one :)

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  7. ShefaliOctober 13, 2013 at 10:43 PM

    A romantic AND an optimist, now that's something you don't see everyday :)

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  8. Ritesh AgarwalOctober 14, 2013 at 2:02 PM

    Sweet poem....say it to a girl and she will be all yours ;)

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  9. Saru SinghalOctober 14, 2013 at 10:36 PM

    Quite an uplifting and motivating poem. Loved the verse with defeat and standing up again.

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    1. Saurabh ChawlaOctober 22, 2013 at 9:13 PM

      Thanks a lot Saru :) I really loved writing this one :)

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  10. Tall Girl in Japan October 21, 2013 at 3:04 PM

    That's a hopeful poem !

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